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Right, first off I just want to apologise. I know it’s VERY late, and I know it’s a bit long (six pages in Arial, size 11 or 3200 words) but I did my best in the situation I’m living in right now. Again, I don’t think it’s up to my usual standard but that’s due to the stuff I’m going through but I tried my best. Thanks to y’all for being so patient.
Ok, the title – well basically, I have a little obsession with Greek Mythology. Scylla and Charybdis is a myth about two monsters, and it’s where the saying “Between a rock and a hard place” originated from. The story goes that there was a stretch of narrow water separated by a large rock which turned the water into two narrow channels. Sailors had to choose which way they wanted to go, however, they faced a problem. Each channel was guarded by one of the two monsters and so whichever way the sailors went they still faced a horrible outcome. I chose this title because I felt it fitted in with the story and the decision that Sawyer had to make. It was a hard choice and whichever way he went he still had a horrible outcome. Oh, and originally I had planned on calling this “Achilles’ Heel” (told you I’m obsessed) but I later changed my mind. “Fermez la bouche” is a less than polite was of saying “shut up” as it literally translates to “shut your mouth.” Any other questions, comments and so on please post but I can’t promise I’ll be the most responsive of souls. Anyways, thanks for reading and good luck to the next writer (JB?) ![]()
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Lol, thanks sweetie. And you're not screwed - you just need to think
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Following a dream
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Firstly loved the title as you know I like the myths too, studied the epic back in AS level... happy days.
Anyway, I throughly enjoyied reading that episode. It was, simply, superb. The characters and plot were both engaging and realistic. There were some surprisingly creepy moments with the MIB and the TV monitors. I like how my character has become such a large feature. The flashforward was good as well... seems as though you've sercured Sawyer's ticket off the island. ![]() I was surprised that it didn't end with Kate's detah but the future is certainly looking grim... I wis I was writing episode 8! Once again- excellent! *applauds*
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Aww, thank you Orsie. God, you have no idea how long it took me to think of that title but when I did, I loved it.
Thanks so much, I tried my best. Yeah, I used the MIB coz well, he was perfect to use for this situation. Lol, creepy? That'll do coz well, it's not my usual genre so I struggled a tad with that. But thanks, that makes me happy Lol, well yes. I had to didn't I.Who says's she's not dead? Lol, I think I'll leave JB to deal with that :P Thanks so much though ![]()
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Following a dream
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It really worked well. I was surprised how well you did do the creepy scenes because I know it isn't your genre, but it worked well I've got to say. Lol, I didn't really expect anythign less... :O You do realize who you sound like? Lol, he better make the right chocie *shakes fist* No probs.
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(Yeah, JB next... then me!
)That was great B, and I think the title was very relevant (not that I knew what it was, but your explanation makes sense :P). I thought the Sawyer choosing scene was clever, with Sawyer (subconsciously) choosing Cassidy in the end. ![]() Poor Kate :smile2 I liked the unrelated stuff too; Alex and her problems, Ben vs. Dani ![]() Another great ep ![]() And then the ending, a simple scene but I like how it connected in with (Kate?) screaming! ![]() This ep has made my mind up on who's flashback I'm going to do (assuming JB doesn't do it first )
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See you in another life
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That was excellent, well worth waiting for! The Man in Black really has some bizarre powers. He is a projection of peoples fears, you said?
![]() Good to see the Alex-Karl-Danielle story line taken up in a sub plot, and also how you gave Sayid a prominent role. And he very much sounds like Sayid, well done! ![]() Also the teddy bear scene, almost a copy of the Michael and Walt scene in "Adrift" which is exactly what happens all the time on Lost. Scenes we have seen already, but played out with different characters. A great homage! ![]() And the flash forward - I didn't see that one coming. Not even when Sawyer said he thought he was dead too. Only when they actually talked about the plane crash. ![]() Now of course Kate can't die because we have seen her in a flash forward too. Just the question then what is going to happen to her, what exactly did Sawyers choice amount to? And if that wasn't Kate, then who was screaming?
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Nicely done... Karlex is back!
And I see you more than subtly brought in some Suliet. :P I love it... congrats. Perhaps that Karl flashback will come up afterall. ![]()
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Thanks, teehee, this pleases me. I wasn't sure if I'd got it right but I tried. Lol, well of course :P Stop it :P Teehee, well we all know which direction I'm going for...as well, Kate and I aren't exactly best buds :P Quote:
I know, the poor lamb. He didn't mean to do it but we all know who is one true love is. Lol, 'You, Beachy' I hear you say you say. Perhaps, but in Lost - Cassidy Don't poor Kate me, it doesn't work :P Ah yes, I felt it was time they appeared again. With Sayid, sweet Sayid. I like to think that it was Kate screaming but I guess it's up to JB. Teehee, how exciting. Quote:
Well of course, and lol, I couldn't leave out Sayid, he's too lovely. Oh I did, well that's good too! Yay! You noticed. That's what I was going for, except obviously I think this version will have ended happily. Cassidy and Clementine accepting him into their lives. Teehee, well I had to secure his fate somehow. I know I so wanted to kill her, although, technically, we could just kill her, right JB? Just get it over with. That'd make me happy again. Not that I'm trying to guilt trip you or anything :P It all depends on JB...no pressure sweetie :P Quote:
Teehee, it's me. Like I was going to let Sawyer and Juliet be apart from each other for long. Why thank you ![]() Or not :P
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Well my dear Beachy, thank you for bringing us back to the world of non-complicated Lost episodes :P I actually understood what was going on in this one!!!
![]() I noticed the similarities between the Michael and Walt scene as well, very subtle *wink wink nudge nudge* Very well done ![]()
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Lol, not a problem my dear Wizzie-pie :P I felt it was time to do something nice and character based, lol.
Good good, I am glad. Thankies ![]()
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