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See you in another life
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Join Date: Aug 2006
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Is it the Black Smoke taking human form perhaps? And you even said there may be more than one of them. ![]() And I forgot to say, I like the little detail about the powder in the orange juice. Reminds me of Mittelos ![]() Oh, and glad to see you took the Robert cross over angle, its what I had hoped for when I had Widmore say "You do remember Robert, don't you" to Locke. Room 168. The numbers 16, and 8, and 1+6+8=15. Is this where he lived in The Brigg when the detectives come and visit him, or did you make that up?
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I Am Banned
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Locke 1, Jack -1000000000
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Locke's Right Hand Side
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Thanks Locke had to be drugged somehow, so I thought if orange juice is good enough for Juliet it's good enough for him, lol.Yeah I wanted Locke to actually have known Robert off-island, and figured that Locke never gave into his torture because he was fired up by anger at Robert's betrayal of him off-island. Room 168 is the actual number of Locke's apartment in TMFT flashback. I got it from Lostpedia, who got it from the form the government worker was filling in at the start of that episode ![]()
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Hello Again :)
Island Architect
Tournaments Won: 1 Join Date: Aug 2006
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Great episode Ki!
I really enjoyed reading that, it was so rich with description and really drew me into a proper sci-fi realm ![]() I loved the line about Locke and the Neighborhood Watch ![]() I also really appreciated this description: Quote:
The Man in Black was also a most intriguing character! ![]()
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Locke 1, Jack -1000000000
Island Warrior
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Locke's Right Hand Side
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Thanks Roco
![]() Poor Locke always suffers one way or another in his flashbacks, so to stay true to canon I had to keep it up! And yeah, you can't beat a good bit of sci-fi; especially a good film like EH! Yeah the Man in Black is a very good character...hopefully the next episode will be put up soon so we find out what's happening to him.
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Hello Again :)
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Yeah, there have been gripes about Locke's 'insufferable' backstory, but personally I think it only serves to strengthen his island story.
Quite, there's nothing wrong with good sci-fi! Interesting..I shall read on with great interest.
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