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Old 08-27-2007, 10:11 PM   #16 (permalink)
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You didn't really think I was going to kill Kate just like that, or did you?
Well it would have been quite a shock for a 'lead' character like Kate to have been killed off so early! But Hurley, curse him, had to then go and prevent her death meaning Kate is still with us lol!
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Old 08-28-2007, 04:09 AM   #17 (permalink)
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Default RE: 4x04 "Everything is going to change" - Discussion thread

This ep makes me want to write an story for it's Alternate Dimension.
I think it would be fun.

Like the Ultimate Marvel universe...
This is the Ultimate LOST universe. :P
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Old 08-28-2007, 12:11 PM   #18 (permalink)
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excellent episode 108. I loved it. Well done
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Old 08-28-2007, 12:30 PM   #19 (permalink)
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Also, a minor quip... but Hurley, being American, would have said "Merry Christmas" no one in america says Happy Christmas. :P
Ki or Rocco, can you change this please?

I love how this thing gets better by collaboration.
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Old 08-28-2007, 12:32 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Very good episode there, 108! It was deliciously twisted with it's warped visions of how things might have been! I thought you worked very well in script format, it suited the story more, I felt! Other than a handful of minor quibbles about dialogue and characterization I think it the best episode thus far... and it's sure going to be a hard act to follow!
Out of interest - which characters did not work in your opinion? I know who I found difficult to write for, just wanted to hear if that matches your perception. I want to learn for Season 5...
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Old 08-28-2007, 01:23 PM   #21 (permalink)
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You didn't really think I was going to kill Kate just like that, or did you?
Well it would have been quite a shock for a 'lead' character like Kate to have been killed off so early! But Hurley, curse him, had to then go and prevent her death meaning Kate is still with us lol!
Indeed. He had to. Its just first time round he did not remember everything correctly and Kate died. He remembered something about a catapult, which is why he is telling her that story, but did not bring one with him. And he could see that Kate would die, but merely telling her not to go on that branch did not work.

Its like that scene Rocco wrote at the end of 4x01, when Jack remembered he had to keep Ben alive. That only gave Jack a headache.

The same thing gave Hurley an entire episode.
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Old 08-28-2007, 02:01 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Also, a minor quip... but Hurley, being American, would have said "Merry Christmas" no one in america says Happy Christmas. :P
I didn't realize ANYONE said Happy Christmas - it's usually Merry Christmas and Happy New Year :P

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Out of interest - which characters did not work in your opinion? I know who I found difficult to write for, just wanted to hear if that matches your perception. I want to learn for Season 5...
Not wanting to nit pick (which means I'm about to) :P but I thought Desmond was too much like Charlie with all his "bloody's"

But other than that I thought you managed to characterize the others very well
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Old 08-28-2007, 02:38 PM   #23 (permalink)
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Also, a minor quip... but Hurley, being American, would have said "Merry Christmas" no one in america says Happy Christmas. :P
I didn't realize ANYONE said Happy Christmas - it's usually Merry Christmas and Happy New Year :P

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Out of interest - which characters did not work in your opinion? I know who I found difficult to write for, just wanted to hear if that matches your perception. I want to learn for Season 5...
Not wanting to nit pick (which means I'm about to) :P but I thought Desmond was too much like Charlie with all his "bloody's"

But other than that I thought you managed to characterize the others very well
Makes me wish I could edit my episode
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Old 08-28-2007, 03:44 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Makes me wish I could edit my episode
I wouldn't worry about it, matey, it was only a little thing that I wouldn't have even brought up had Ors not mentioned it...

*points finger at Ors* :P
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Old 08-28-2007, 04:04 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Makes me wish I could edit my episode
I wouldn't worry about it, matey, it was only a little thing that I wouldn't have even brought up had Ors not mentioned it...

*points finger at Ors* :P
I'm not going to take the bloody's out. Without them it doesn't work for me, and then I'd have to rewrite those lines completely. Interesting point though, swearing all the time is a Charlie thing, isn't it.

I only want to change the Happy Christmas bit. :P
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Old 08-28-2007, 04:33 PM   #26 (permalink)
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Superb episode! I loved the little picture of the Lost opening title sequence too haha ... felt strangely real lol
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Old 08-28-2007, 05:21 PM   #27 (permalink)
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Can I ask you guys something else?

Are the cross overs and clues so blatantly obvious that no one points them out, or has no one discovered them?

Apart from EPU who recognised Dr Hawking
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108 I'll edit the Happy to Merry Christmas bit out now for you.
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108 I'll edit the Happy to Merry Christmas bit out now for you.
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