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Join Date: Oct 2006
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I actually thought that you got all of the character connections and relationships dead on. No one seemed oddly sinister or indeed friendly. My only criticism is that you didn't go with '...for words' i personally think that would have tied in nicely with the other Jin/Sun episodes and would have put less emphasis on the rain which IMO didn't play as big a part on the episode as i suspected at first. Obviously though that was your own choice and you've every reason to stand by it, just me putting in my two cents worth. |
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Film Edits Rule!
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Thanks for the kind words guys.
Hey Kor... I like my other title better too... You think you could change the title for me? :P "... For Words"
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Maybe not this one since Rocco has locked it ![]()
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Locke 1, Jack -1000000000
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I'll change the title Mal
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Brilliant! Much better title considering the content of the episode!!
And, Malion, thats quite a clever trick there. Cause this title *could* give the identity of the shooter away, so when we first read it you picked a non spoiler title. Now that we have read it, you give the correct title. ![]() As I said, clever ![]()
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I think Mal would rather the former :P |
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![]() Holy Magikarp! Thats the exact reason I didn't pick it in the first place. Wow... you read me like a book. Man... you're good. No seriously... and I figured we could call it that now, because you've all already read it. ![]()
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Yes, and you have the name of one of our newer members of the forum. :P
And it's a Flashback ep anyway. ![]() Another reason I didn't put it as "...for Words" initially, is because it seemed to me, that I was making a shout out of sorts to my old C4 friend "Lost_for_Words" Who is someone whom I gave a large cameo in my Alt. LOST fic. But.. that's retarded, as most of you don't remember LFW... maybe. Ok, I'll stop talking now, I'm getting nowhere with this. :P
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i loved it mal.
thought you did a really great job of that ![]() i'm still confused about the Locke story though ![]()
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In true lost fashion, I left Locke utterly confusing. Let Mrs. Ferg deal with 'im. ![]()
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Actually just thinking that when you introduced Desmond he didn't say much. But I hope someone remembers that he has to tell everyone Charlie is dead, otherwise we'll have a big big continuity error.
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Locke Falls
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Desmond doesnt have to tell anyone if he doesn't want to
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Oh yeah, I just remembered. This is Lost. They don't talk.
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