Another survivor

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Originally Posted by monster-eats-pilot

This may have to wait a bit I have a lot of cwk that needs doing

Nearly done with the cwk so will do some more next week maybe

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Story's gone abit off topic and the original style but it will get back to it soon when I decide to write another bit..I've thought of a brilliant ending, just need to get there

“Hey Charlie! What happened? Who is she?”
“How the bloody hell do I know Locke! I followed the boar down here and found her!”
“We need to check if she’s breathing.” The woman moved forward to check.
“Don’t move her Kate she could of broken something. Is she breathing?”
“Yeah she’s breathing John but she’s been knocked out, you see that rock it’s got blood on it. It doesn’t take a doctor to work out she must of hit her head.”
“Well what should we do? We can‘t move her and we can‘t leave her here to bleed to death.”
“We need to get Jack, Charlie”
“Boone you’re the fastest runner here go and get him…NOW!”
Boone sighed thinking he wasn’t wanted and was just getting in the way then ran off as fast as he could in the direction of their camp to get the doctor.
Charlie went to check her pack which had landed next to her and Kate carefully pulled her hair away from the girl’s face and slightly rolled her over so she wasn’t face down.
John walked round to look at the wound on her head. “Don’t move her to far she…” He had a clear view of her face.
Kate stared at John who was looking at the girl and looking confused. “What’s the matter Locke?”
“Hey guys! Look what I found in her pack!” Charlie pulled out a piece of paper. Kate took it and saw it had a rough map of their camp and the jungle. “Why would she have a map of our camp in her pack? Do you think she was heading to our camp?”
“I don’t know Charlie what else is in there?”
“Just a water bottle and some fruit oh and a blanket. Looks like she planned to be walking for a long time and figured she’d be staying the night in the jungle of fun.” Charlie moved over to get a better look at the girl. “Hey Locke what’s wrong? Surely you’re used to finding strange things including mysterious unconscious girls with a map to our camp by now.”
Locke continued to stare at the girl. “No I-I um I think I know her.”

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She kept her eyes tightly shut. Her head pounded, it felt like it was going to explode. She knew she was alive because the pain was so real and it surged through her body, getting to every part it could. She wouldn’t be in this much pain if she was dead. She groaned. She didn’t want to open her eyes, not yet. She knew she’d fallen and must of banged her head and she didn’t want to see her surroundings. She didn’t want to see anything. If she kept her eyes closed it wouldn’t be real, she could pretend she was somewhere else and block out the pain.

She lay there and willed herself to fall asleep or drift off just so she could escape reality. She knew she wasn’t even with it but she was with it enough to want to escape it. Her senses were weak and she could feel herself dehydrating. She knew she’d have to face reality sooner or later but for now she just wanted to be somewhere else. She started imagining she was on the beach where she’d first seem their camp, she was on holiday and her family were there with her and there was a big, 5 star hotel with lots of friendly people. She could hear them chatting gently, their conversations inaudible but soothing, she could feel the sun warming her and kissing her skin, she could hear the waves breaking gently and making her feel sleepy. She felt happy and calm and she opened up her senses wanting them to take her into her fantasy.

Suddenly something jolted inside her. She wasn’t in her fantasy she realised she could actually here people talking, she could feel the sun’s rays and she could hear waves. A rush of fear spread through her, how could she feel and hear these things when she was in the middle of the jungle? She forced her eyes open. She was lying flat on her back starring straight up at the sky. It took her a few minutes to get used to the bright light. She propped herself up and saw she was on the beach next to a tree line. Slowly she tilted her head to the right, she saw the sea about 10 metres from her. She looked to the left and just saw the trees. She panicked. How had she gotten from a ditch in the jungle to a beach? Somebody had brought her here she thought. She didn’t want to stay and find out who it was.


She stood up quickly and ran a few steps before the pain forced her down into the sand. She heard somebody shout and heard people running. She didn't look round. She forced herself back up and stumbled off towards the trees. She could hear somebody behind her getting closer. She gritted her teeth and fought the pain and kept on going but she felt somebody grab her back and somebody else grab her arms and pull her back. She screamed and then the pain in her head surged and it caused her to black out.

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On hiatus Always wanted to use that phrase Will be back after exams/prom and all that so beginning of July