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Welcome to ALT LOST!
It's my replay of the lost tale from new eyes... I've posted this before yes... but, never here... Plus I've decided to pick it up again... So... I'll start over from the begining. Hope you all like.... again. ALT LOST Episode 1: New Eyes ----- A man sits in plane seat, his hair is mat, it always was mat. Woman: Do you need anything sir? Man: Uh, no thanks. You? The woman smiled and walked across the aisle to the next person. Soon everyone was served and a voice rang throughout the plane. Pilot?: We are experiencing some difficulties, please remain in your seats. Man: Oh great, all I need, now I’m gonna be la… *Boom!* *commercial!* The Man looked around, he was on the ground and there were noises. Man: What the? He tried to get up, but failed to do so. And suddenly a man appeared and pulled something off his chest. Pulled-something-off-chest-guy: Are you ok? Man: Uh, yeah, I think so, do you know where we are? Pulled-something-off-chest-guy: No, sorry, I don't, can you move? Man: I guess. The man moved his legs, and moved his arm… arm? Man: My arm, I think something is on it. Pulled-something-off-chest-guy: No, it looks like it's broken, lets try to move you. Man: Is it, night-time... already? Pulled-something-off-chest-guy: Yeah, it looks like you were out for quite a while, its lucky that Locke found you. Man: Who? Another man was next to him, he looked like some sort of a solider. Locke (apparently): Lets get you up. The two lifted the man and carried him back to the wreckage of the what appeared to be the plane. Locke: Do you have a name? Man: Uh, yeah sure. Its Mac, Malion Mac. Pulled-something-off-chest-guy: Well I’m Jack, nice to meet you. It would seem that the plane had crashed, but Malion wasn’t sure anymore, it was a weird day indeed. *commercial* *wind noise* Malion: Now class, what is this? Class: A cow! Malion: Very good, now what does the cow say? Class: Mooooooo! Malion: Very good, now class, guess what! It's recess time! Class: Yay!!!!!!!!!! The class clears and a young woman comes in. Woman: Hey cutie. Malion: Mary, I didn’t know you were coming, such a pleasant surprise. Mary: Well, I never miss my finance’s first day back to work. Malion: Aww, thanks sweetie, can you belive they gave me 16 kids already. Mary: I do, you’re the best teacher in town. *wind noise* Some woman: Is he okay? Jack: Hopefully, but his right arm looks pretty ruff. Some big guy: Yeah dude, that’s not cool. Jack: Clear a spot. Jack and Locke lowered Malion onto the floor of the small tent. Jack: Now let’s see that arm. Jack studies the wound, and frowns. Jack: I’m sorry, but with the medicine I have, there’s nothing I can do to save your arm. Malion: What? What are you going to do then? Jack: It looks like I’ll have to amputate. *commercial* That woman who was referred to as ‘Some Woman’: Is he going to be okay Jack? Jack: Yes Kate, but his arm wont, I’ll have to remove it. Kate: Oh no, that’s terrible. Malion: I can hear you, you know! Kate: Oh sorry. Kate exited quickly. Jack walked over to Malion. Malion: Oh well, just get it over. Jack inserted a needle into Malion’s arm, Malion began to feel sleepy. He closed his eyes and began a dreamless rest. He woke in a sweat, there was blood everywhere. Malion: Get it over with dammit!!! Jack: It Is over. Malion looked at his right arm, which was just a bloody empty sleeve. Jack: It was a huge success considering the conditions, now I want you to rest for a day or two, it’s going to be awhile before that gash heals up. *wind* Mary: Are you just gonna stand there, or are you gonna kiss me? Malion: Oh sorry, thinking about something or another. Malion leans over and kisses Mary on the lips. She laughs. Malion: What’s so funny? Mary: Nothing, I’m just glad you're back, now kiss me like a man. Malion twitched and leaned forward. Class: Oooooh!! His class was standing in the doorway. Malion: Heh, sorry about that Mary, I guess we can smooch latter like grown-ups do. His class made various noises, but mostly of disgust. Kid: Eww, kissy stuff. Mary: Well bye Mr. Mac, I’ll see you later. Malion: Ok Miss Retorian. Later it is then. Mary smiled and walked slowly out of the room. Malion sighed deeply as his class sat on the floor. Malion: Now where were we, oh yes. I’m going to tell you about the great white polar bear. Kids: Oooooooooh! Malion whispered quickly to himself as he picked up a book. Malion: Man she was hot, I am the luckiest man alive. *LOST*
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Following a dream
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Fave Character: Daniel
Lost Item: Faraday's Journal
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Is this the story you were posting back on C4?
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ALT LOST
Episode 2 Healing *wind* Malion begins to jog down the street, it has been a very hard day, but it was nice compared to his earlier days, he quickly grabbed a CD and put it in his CD player. It began to play. Malion: Oh I love this song... Sit in your living room, distractions on Tea all gone and thinking of more things that you can say. Soon his cell phone rang, and he was forced to pick it up after whoever didnt hang up. Malion: Hello? Phone: Mister Mac? Mister Malion Mac? Malion: Yeah thats me. Phone: We're calling about your wife. Malion stopped still, holding the phone tightly. Malion: What's wrong? Phone: She has been detained. Malion: What!? Phone: Yes, Mrs. Alice Mac has been arested, over drunk driving. Malion fell on the ground. Malion: Oh, you scarred me, you mean my Ex. Wife. *wind-comercial* Malion sat up in the tent and looked over at his arm again, he touched it with his hand. It was just a small stump on his sholder with stitches at the bottom. Malion: Man, I feel like a old rag doll. Big guy: You look like one too. Malion: Huh? Oh, hi... uh..? Big guy: I'm just messing with ya dude, sorry about that. Malion: Oh no, thats ok, you just caught me by suprise. Big guy: What you didnt see me coming? You blind too now? Malion laughed and shook his head. Malion: Uh, no. Have we met? Big guy: Well I did see you that one time, but no... I guess we havent. I'm Hurley. Malion: Well hello there, uh... Hurley. The names Malion. Hurley reached to shake hands, but quickly swiched hands after realizing. Hurley: Reflex, sorry, good seeing ya Malion. Malion: Yeah you too Hurley. Drop by anytime, I'll probably be here awhile. Jack: Not too much longer, I think I can take the stiches out by tomorrow, then you'll be perfectly fine. Malion: Hey thanks Jack, I havent even looked at the island yet, well.... except for that one night. Hurley: Well I best be off, got things to d.... well, not really, but, uh.... see ya. Hurley walked out of the tent and Jack sits next to Malion and takes out a bottle of water. Jack: So, you're a dextrocardiac huh? Malion: No.... wait, whats that again. Jack: Your Heart, its on the right side, instead of the left. Malion: Oh that, yeah, that's me, mister backwards. Jack offered Malion water, which he drunk very quickly before handing it back. Jack: So which hand are you? Malion: What do you mean? Jack: You hand, which is your writing hand? Malion: Uh, obviously my left hand, now. Jack smiled an awkward smile before re-stating himself. Jack: I mean before this. Malion: Oh, still Left. Jack: Well thats good news, it will be much less dificult to adapt then. Malion: Yeah I guess it will. Jack: Well, I'd better be off, theres another paitent I need to look after. Malion: Oh, well I'll be seeing you then. Jack exited and Malion layed back down onto his mat. Malion: That Jack is an awful conversationalist, but he sure can doctor... I mean... uh, heal? I think that's the right term....man, I sure could use a dictionary right about now. *comercial* *wind* Malion: Alice? Alice? Alice was silent behind the glass, though her blonde hair was still oddly shimmering, like that had a salon in there or something. Malion: Why are you in prision Alice? Again? Alice did not speak but merely stared at Malion, seemingly peering into his soul. Malion: Well, I invited Mary. Alice banged her head on the metal table. Malion: But... but! She stayed in the car. Alice stopped banging her head and resumed her deep stare, not of anger or sadness, just a black stare. Malion: At least say something. Alice leaned toward the glass, motioning Malion to do the same. Alice in whispers: Go to hell Malion, thats were the devil is, I think you two would get along. Go.... to.... hell. Alice stood and walked back out of the room, followed by the gaurd. *wind* Malion began moving his legs, and his arm back and forth, he guessed that he should atleast exercise some before trying to walk around all disproportionate like he would have to. Jack walked in as usual, carrying water. Jack: Well its today. Malion: Of course it is. Jack: Well its the tomorrow of yesterday. Malion: Huh? Wait... oh, you mean its "The day". Jack: That I remove the stiches in your arm. Malion (slighty sarcastic): Already, I didnt notice. Jack sat on the floor next to Malion. Jack: Now, I dont have any anesthesia, so this is gonna hurt a bit. Malion: I can take it. It took Jack close to an hour to remove the whole stiching, it wasnt as fast as Malion had expected as the thread kept breaking and knoting. Finally though.... Jack: There, done. Malion: Wow really, thanks Doc, I'll make it up to you, I promise. Jack: That really wont be neccisary, but I would suggest that you try not to work yourself too hard, and that you should take these pills when you feel pain in your arm. Malion: Thanks a lot, I'll never forget this. Jack: Hey, its my j... I'ts what I do. Malion grabbed his bag that locke had found and began out of the tent and into the beautiful landscape. Malion: Well....this is new. What to do now? *LOST* *to be continued*
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Well I'm posting this agian... for about the 12th time.
![]() ALT LOST Episode 3: Murphy's Law Malion looked out onto the vast ocean with all its shimmering glory. Malion: nice, now let me find something to eat! Malion walked about the people, all of which stared at him strangely. Malion: Hmm, I guess they dont see new people much, or pehaps... The gimped man looked over at his arm again, it was obvious now, lets face it, he looked strange in his unarmed state. He continued to walk between small beach camps and onto the edge of the jungle. Malion: Well, thats where my food is, theres got to be a fruit tree in this massive jungle someplace. Lets just hope I can find on before nightfall. *wind!!* Mary: Now what happened back there? Malion: I'm not sure really. Mary: Well tell me something then! Malion: Ok, I tried to talk to her, but she wouldnt say anything, and when I said your name she bashed he head into the table. Mary: Is she a psycho? Malion: I would be inclinded to think so, after what she's done. Mary: Drunk driving? Malion: No... it was a little more horrifing than that.. *comercial* *wind* Mary: Well.... what was it? Malion: I'd... rather not, talk about it. Mary: Fine, have it your way. Just tell me what happened after that. Malion: Well... she called me the devil, and said to go to hell. Mary: Seriouly, but you went to post her bail, she didnt accept? Malion: She didnt answer to it, so I guess not. Mary: Well I'm glad that you're far away from her, she's mental. Malion: Yeah... I guess... *wind* Malion: Now to cross over. Malion attempts to climb over a bit of underbrush, but fails miserably. Malion: Aww crap, what now. Voice: You could just go around it. Malion: Yeah, go arou... wait, who is that? Voice: I think thats an irrelavant question based on your situation. Malion: Oh Locke! Malion pulls himself up and turns to Locke. Malion: Thank goodness, you wouldn't know of any... fruit trees around here would you? Locke: Well, I think so, over beyond that tall tree back there. Malion squinting: Really? That far. Locke: Or that one that you are standing under. Malion looked up and saw a mango. Malion: Hey thanks Locke, I owe you one. Locke: Nah, its no problem. Just pointed you in the right direction. Malion: Well thanks again. Locke left and Malion was left alone under the rather tall tree. Malion: Well, this might be a bit difficult. *commercial* Malion removed his shirt and held it in his hand. Malion: Perhaps... If I wrap it around the.... no, I need two hands for that. He struggled putting the shirt on again and sat himself under the tree. Malion: I cant do this, not without an arm. Someone: Doesnt seem likely. Malion: Locke? Someone: Do I look like Locke?! Malion turned toward the voice to see a short man, with a british accent... well, he didnt see the accent, but he heard it. Malion: Oh sorry I... hey, wait... do I know you? Someone: Not that I can remember, though you may have heard of me. Malion: Really, where? Someone: The name's Charlie, I'm in a band, you know. Driveshaft. Malion: Nah, get otta here. Charlie?: No really It true "You all everybody.... you all everybody." Malion: Ha, you're really serious, I love that band, I have the CD in my bag. Charlie?: Wow, really, would you like me to sign it. Malion: Are you sure you're in Driveshaft. Charlie?: I'm the ruddy bass player, of course I'm am! Malion pulled out the cd and looked at the band picture. Malion: Liam, Sinjin, Patrick, and... well I'll be, Charlie Pace. Charlie: You want me to sign the picture. Malion: Yeah sure... you're awesome, wait... I dont have a pen. Malion stood still for a second having the strange thought that someone would magically hand him a pen, but the thought quickly passed. Charlie: Oh well, thats too bad, but... uh, need any help getting that Kiwi? Malion: Uh, its a Mango. Charlie: Mango eh? Well, I've got it. Malion: That wont be neccesary, I think I'd better get it. Charlie: Nah, its no problem. I've got it. Malion: Well... maybe just this once. Charlie: Ok. Charlie climbs the tree and grabs a low piece of fruit. Charlie: Here you go mate, dont stress yourself too hard. Malion: I think I'll manage, thanks for the fruit though. Charlie: No prob, see ya round. Charlie walked off and and Malion bit into the Mango. Malion: Gah! It tasted like a soggy candle. Malion: Peel first, must peel first. *wind* Pastor: I now pronounce you man and wife, you may kiss the bride. Malion leans close and picks up Mary as they kiss in circles. Malion puts her in his arms as they walk out of the Chapel and into their tackily decorated car. Malion: We're off to the land of dreams me' lady. Mary: Oh you are ever so kind, fine gentleman. They drive off into the setting night, to Flordia, to the place where they first met. *time passes* Mary: Are we almost there honey, I cant wait another minute. Malion: Well Flordia is 4 hours away from our hometown you know. Mary: Yes, I know, but it still stinks to wait this long. Malion: Oh well, good things come to those who wa... His voice trailed as he saw something in his view. Malion: Did you see that? Mary: No? What? Malion: I.... nothing, its noth... *boom* *comercial* Malion was bleeding, his car had fliped over many times. Malion: Oh no, Mary, you ok? Mary: Yeah, I think so. Malion: Well thank goodness, I... cant move though. Mary: Its ok sweetie, the ampulance is bound to come soon. Malion: I... I... know Mar.........y? Mary! what the?! A form appeared in the upsidedown window, it smashed though and opened the door. Mary screamed as she was dragged out of the car. Malion: MARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Malion struggled out of his seat as he pulled the belt loose and got out of the car falling to the ground. Mary was pulled farther away, she struggled and fought, but it was no use. The figure threw Mary to the ground and began stabbing her with a knife. Malion could hear the piercing screams of his love as he helplessly struggled to get up. Malion: Mary! No! n-no. His voice straned and went horse. Mary fell limp on the ground. Malion shook violently, why was this happening. The figure walked up to him. Figure: Why do you love her? Malion blinked and gazed through his tears at the thing he most fears. Malion: Alice? H-how, could you?! How Could You, to Mary? To me? Alice: Because Malion, I love you, I want you to be happy. Malion: What!? Happy!? You filthy BITCH!! You've destroyed my entire life! Everything I cared for, everything I loved, gone in one fatal stab. Why are you doing this!?!?!?!!!! Alice: Because I love you babe, and I hope you will too because if not.... Alice kicked Malion in the groin and he fell back onto the ground, where she continued to kick him in the side over and over. Alice: You do love me right? She kicked him again and walked away laughing at Mary's mangled corpse. *LOST*
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Episode 4 Mangos Malion walked out of the jungle with the bitten Mango in his hand. Malion: Need a knife. Voice: Knife eh? Malon: Locke? Voice: No. Malion: Oh, uh... Charlie? Voice: Uh... no. Malion: Um... Voice: Just turn around! Malion: Oh sorry. Person: Have I seen you before? Malion: I... dont think so. Person: Oh ok, just checking. The name's Lisa... Lisa Wren, but you can call me Frances. Malion: Frances? Lisa/Frances?: Well, thats my middle name, but I use that instead of Lisa Frances Wren, which is way too long. Malion: Oh... Ok, My name is Malion, well... Malion Mac. Frances: Got a middle name. Malion: Uh, sure, Mana. Frances: Mana? So your initials are MMM. Malion: Yeah I guess so. Frances: Cool, you need a knife? Malion: Yeah. Frances: Dont got one, but I think my new tentmate has one. Malion: Oh really, can I see him, I need to eat this fruit before it bruises or something. Frances: Why not just bite it then? Malion: The skin tastes like wax, and not the edible kind that you pour onto your.... uh, *cough* .....its no good. Frances: Ok, I'll lead the way... you wouldnt have any dairy products around would you? Malion: Uh... no. *wind!* Teacher: Miss Wren, would you come up here a moment? Frances: Uh.. sure. Frances walked toward the teachers desk, this usually wasnt a good thing. Teacher: You do realize that it is inapropiate to eat food in my class. Frances: Sorry teach. Teacher: Obviously not, as this is the 12th time this week that I've caught you eating cheese at your desk. Frances: Yeah well sue me. Teacher: I'm afraid I am going to have to remove you from my class. Frances: But teach... Teacher: Respect your elders, Young lady, my proper name is Professor Lambert. Frances: Oh sorry.... Pro,Fes,Sor Lam,Bert. I'm just saying that I need this class to graduate. Professor: You should have thought of that before. Frances: Aww crap. *comercial* Frances: Hey Dan!! ...uh, He's not in there. Malion: Any idea where he might be? Frances: No, not really. Malion: Oh... got anything sharp? Frances: Yeah I thi... woah, you dont have an arm! Malion stared hard at the woman, with utter confusion in his eyes. Malion: Yeah....... Are you just noticing? Frances: Yeah sorry, I was distracted I guess. Malion: Oh... uh, ok. Frances seached around and found a fork. Frances: Will this do? Malion: Yeah, sure. Malion picked away at the mango for close to an hour before it was completely bare of the dreaded skin. Malion: Thanks, want a piece? Frances: What's it taste like? Malion: Uh... like a fruit. Frances: Yeah I guess. Frances took a small piece of the mango from Malion and put it in her mouth. Frances: Nice, is there more? Malion: Yeah theres a whole tree of em' nearby. Frances: Then what are we waiting for, grab that bag and lead the way there. Malion: Uh....... sure. He quickly ate the mango, it was delicous. He could go for more. *wind* Frances: No mom, I dont have the money for another semester..... But it's just one class...... Yeah, I know..... No?...... You arent paying for it? But, you have to mom, its the only way for me....... but......... but.....I see.........Well forget you then, see if I'm comming back home. Frances hung up the phone and ran up the stairs to her dorm room. Person: Lisa, what's happening. Frances: Nothing Ken. Ken: I saw what happened today, with mister dickwad. Frances: Yeah, well, see ya. Ken: Where you going? Frances: Wherever isnt here. Ken: Can I come. Frances: Only if you can keep up. *comercial* Frances: Ok, I'll climb up the tree, and drop them to you. Malion: Sure, ok. He held the bag in his teeth and left arm as Frances dropped close to 12 mangos in the bag. Malion: Sweet. Frances: I guess that'll do. Malion: I'm hungry just looking at em. Frances: What are we waiting for... She pulls out two forks and a spoon. Frances: Lets eat! *LOST*
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