Ooooh that was brilliant! So the plot thickens lol! I sense Ethan is going to have a bit more to say on the situation, seeing as he's acting so creepy and skulking off into the jungle. I loved the conversation between him and Ellie, she seems genuinely freaked out by him. And her reaction to Ashley is great too, the way she's bitter that she hasn't apologised anymore and Locke's off with her. It's something I would think too if that had happened. And paranoia is always good
But ooooo why does she want a gun? Ellie doesn't strike me as the kind of person who would wave a gun in someone's face. She's not going to do an Ana-Lucia, is she?
As usual, it's brilliant
I'm going to have to read over my last chapter because I've kind of forgot what happened lol. And last week my computer completely went balls up with a virus, and I just had to pay £60 to get it back on, only to find that aaaall my stuff has been wiped off. And I was too stupid to make backups
And yah I'm peachy thanks
Apart from the losing of all my written stuff
Hope you're peachy too!
I'll probs start writing my bit tomorrow sometime. I was going to start now, but I've just noticed it's nearly 12 lol!