That's brilliant fbf! It's really good to have a supernatural element to the story with Chuck popping up every now and again, and it really is believable that Ashely would act like she did with little sleep and having seen him in the jungle...so has he really been cut free and is living, or was he cut free but then died and is now coming back to haunt her?
'I wish for her to stop looking at me' Lol I just love that line for some reason: like Ellie is already annoying her, and Ashley is doing her best to keep her patience in check. Actually I do like the way it's turned out that our characters have not met under the best of circumstances: it just makes it that bit more interesting and gives things a bit more depth than if they had met in a more light hearted setting, if that makes sense?
And I think you did get Ellie's character down well after the accidental knife flying attack, since she wouldn't be one to rant and rave at someone: more likely she'd keep quiet and try and figure things out first in a situation like that...I can see her keeping her anger and suspicion towards Ashely to herself for a while and won't feel the need to tell the rest of the camp what happened. Maybe she'll talk to Locke but I don't know yet, lol. Or Ethan will try and get her to talk but she won't feel comfortable about that for some reason (assuming we're still keeping Ethan as an Other perhaps?).
But I would still quite like it if E+A do open up more with each other give time. They can always fall out again afterwards anyway! lol
But yeah great chapter, and I will get another one up as soon as I can.
