Ah thanks!
I don't have much (well any actually until now) practice of writing Arzt, so I wasn't sure how he'd come across...but I figured that if he was moaning about something he'd at least be half in character, lol.
And I'm still not quite sure what Hurley was bulding/organising/whatever to make Arzt so annoyed! lol I should really I gues...but if you have any ideas and want to continue it by all means feel free to
I do like writing Arzt though, he's a great character to focus on every now and again I think. Let's not kill him off!
And I'm glad you're ok with the ending: I wanted something fairly dramatic/interesting to happen at the end rather than Ellie just bumping into Ashley and that's it, but at the same time I don't want to put too much pressure on you to carry it on or anything.
Yeah it's those four in the jungle at the moment: in my mind Locke has been taking Ethan into the jungle to practice hunting and knife skills, but why Ashley's got a knife of her own is as yet unknown...
And I look forward to when you do write it!