Personally I found that truely amazing! Honestly i cannot speak higly enough of what you have done there..i like creative writing like that..it's so real..and by real i mean that it's not afraid to express the true workings of the human mind, even if it's slightly disturbing or sadistic [like when Sayid felt happy that he was able to inflict pain upon Henry]..i think it captured the emotion, despair and spiralling moral decent of Sayid to a T.
Bravo.
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