OK, the edit button is gone. So I'll post a new ending here:
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The door opens.
???: I never knew Cork was so dark and wet.
Peter: I was wondering about that, I always though Ireland was green and sunny
Kaitlin: I blame Tim Kring for that one. It was fine til he showed up
???: That works. He looks around. There you are John!
Locke: Oh great. You’re here  . Is the screaming fan girl army for you or the Stupid one?
Boone: Looks up from his Appletini. They're with him. Mines nowhere near that big. He points at a small handfull of girls in the corner. Thats what happens when you've been dead for over 3 seasons.
???: OK Locke, now we've shown I'm better than him, time for payback. Medical Style!
Who is ???, Will Sawyer ever lose? Will Richard get Micah? Where is this story going? Find out next time!
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Thanks for the praise guys. Don't worry about Alpert, the way I've got it planned, he'll get his chance.
Chapter 2 coming sometime over the weekend if can can be bothered to write it.
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Isn't Matt Smith in Busted?
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Admit it. You laughed inside.
I did have something asking you to comment my stories here, but it made me feel unclean so I took it out.
