Thanks!
I'm not sure whether I'm going to keep on with it really. I tried writing more and I kept baffling myself lol
I might have a bash, but I keep getting tempted to go in the Changing Fate direction and dropping loads of characters
You should try it Ki, it would be class. I don't think I've read any OCs by you so you have to do it at some point
I have to say when I was writing the second part I was listening to the Lost soundtrack, so that might have helped some