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***monster-eats-pilot*** · 04-14-2008, 10:03 PM

Story's gone abit off topic and the original style but it will get back to it soon when I decide to write another bit..I've thought of a brilliant ending, just need to get there

“Hey Charlie! What happened? Who is she?”
“How the bloody hell do I know Locke! I followed the boar down here and found her!”
“We need to check if she’s breathing.” The woman moved forward to check.
“Don’t move her Kate she could of broken something. Is she breathing?”
“Yeah she’s breathing John but she’s been knocked out, you see that rock it’s got blood on it. It doesn’t take a doctor to work out she must of hit her head.”
“Well what should we do? We can‘t move her and we can‘t leave her here to bleed to death.”
“We need to get Jack, Charlie”
“Boone you’re the fastest runner here go and get him…NOW!”
Boone sighed thinking he wasn’t wanted and was just getting in the way then ran off as fast as he could in the direction of their camp to get the doctor.
Charlie went to check her pack which had landed next to her and Kate carefully pulled her hair away from the girl’s face and slightly rolled her over so she wasn’t face down.
John walked round to look at the wound on her head. “Don’t move her to far she…” He had a clear view of her face.
Kate stared at John who was looking at the girl and looking confused. “What’s the matter Locke?”
“Hey guys! Look what I found in her pack!” Charlie pulled out a piece of paper. Kate took it and saw it had a rough map of their camp and the jungle. “Why would she have a map of our camp in her pack? Do you think she was heading to our camp?”
“I don’t know Charlie what else is in there?”
“Just a water bottle and some fruit oh and a blanket. Looks like she planned to be walking for a long time and figured she’d be staying the night in the jungle of fun.” Charlie moved over to get a better look at the girl. “Hey Locke what’s wrong? Surely you’re used to finding strange things including mysterious unconscious girls with a map to our camp by now.”
Locke continued to stare at the girl. “No I-I um I think I know her.”

04-14-2008, 10:03 PM	#17 (permalink)
*monster-eats-pilot* Waiting to get LOST again Island Guardian Ants Champion! Movie Star Match-Up Champion! Duck Hunt 2 Champion! AeroPlane Champion! Tournaments Won: 1 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Mystery Frickin' Island Fave Character: Smokey Lost Item: Jesus Stick Posts: 7,950 Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Story's gone abit off topic and the original style but it will get back to it soon when I decide to write another bit..I've thought of a brilliant ending, just need to get there “Hey Charlie! What happened? Who is she?” “How the bloody hell do I know Locke! I followed the boar down here and found her!” “We need to check if she’s breathing.” The woman moved forward to check. “Don’t move her Kate she could of broken something. Is she breathing?” “Yeah she’s breathing John but she’s been knocked out, you see that rock it’s got blood on it. It doesn’t take a doctor to work out she must of hit her head.” “Well what should we do? We can‘t move her and we can‘t leave her here to bleed to death.” “We need to get Jack, Charlie” “Boone you’re the fastest runner here go and get him…NOW!” Boone sighed thinking he wasn’t wanted and was just getting in the way then ran off as fast as he could in the direction of their camp to get the doctor. Charlie went to check her pack which had landed next to her and Kate carefully pulled her hair away from the girl’s face and slightly rolled her over so she wasn’t face down. John walked round to look at the wound on her head. “Don’t move her to far she…” He had a clear view of her face. Kate stared at John who was looking at the girl and looking confused. “What’s the matter Locke?” “Hey guys! Look what I found in her pack!” Charlie pulled out a piece of paper. Kate took it and saw it had a rough map of their camp and the jungle. “Why would she have a map of our camp in her pack? Do you think she was heading to our camp?” “I don’t know Charlie what else is in there?” “Just a water bottle and some fruit oh and a blanket. Looks like she planned to be walking for a long time and figured she’d be staying the night in the jungle of fun.” Charlie moved over to get a better look at the girl. “Hey Locke what’s wrong? Surely you’re used to finding strange things including mysterious unconscious girls with a map to our camp by now.” Locke continued to stare at the girl. “No I-I um I think I know her.” __________________ #5 The first time I heard myself on the radio. #4 Dad teaching me to swim at Butlins. #3 The Christmas Liam gave me the ring. #2 Woman outside Covent Garden calls me a hero. #1 The night I met you.