Ooooooo, Mep, that was wonderful. I knew you could write paragraphs! And no, I'm not your teacher
but I do like to help people, lol.
I really like how you let us see into the character's mind - her fear and desperation. Very well done.
I hope she's ok though, and that she gets back to the camp - poor lass. Oh, and you're very good at cliffhangers, lol.
